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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: jfreed18 on March 03, 2011, 11:36:47 PM

Title: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 03, 2011, 11:36:47 PM

Hi Everyone Here is a fun project between (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWOO10) 'Zak's Bullets' I went ahead and shortened the title a little. But I want to thank everyone I had mentioned each of them worked very hard on this cool project R4M, Tricia, Mike, JW0010. This is the first time I had posted audio in Finished Works. you all did a fantastic job! Thank you everyone your friend Jimmy.   

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 04, 2011, 05:33:44 AM

Thanks Jimmy! Post the lyrics and the ape file too? Some folks like to have those.

Great job writing this Jimmy, and Bill came up with a really cool idea for the music!

This was a fun and painless collab!  8) 

Cool drums, awesome bass, and great guitar work and mix!  Love this song!  8) 8) :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: THP on March 04, 2011, 05:59:31 AM

Nice!

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Mr. Mom on March 04, 2011, 09:03:43 AM

ALRIGHT!!  8) 8)
Great song y'awl :) ...and Jimmy gets to post one in the Finished Forum. There's another notch in your belt Jimmy, congrats. :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 09:53:10 AM

Hi Tricia wow and many thanks. You did a such a terrific job on the vocals and Bill, Mike and JWoo10 each did a terrific job on the music. This project was a lot of fun  :). I'm playing it again this morning. And yep I will post the lyrics here to  :). You all did a fantastic job! Thank you Tricia your friend Jimmy

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 09:54:38 AM

Hi THP wow and many thanks I appreciate it. This song was a lot of fun. Thank you THP your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 09:56:54 AM

Hi John Wow and many thanks. Yep I figured out how to post audio in Finsihed Works with the cool steps. I've never done that before  :). But it's always fun going to Finished Works and playing this cool song again  :). Thank you John your friend Jimmy

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: PVD on March 04, 2011, 10:06:05 AM

Good rocker, well done everyone.

Paul

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 12:28:07 PM

Hi Tricia okay I went back and got the lyrics this afternoon as I played this cool song again. You did such a terrific job on the vocals  :). And the lyrics you wrote are great for the song. You did a fantastic job! Thank you Tricia your friend Jimmy.

Zachary's Bullets

V1
If Zachary could write
And make his mark
He will clear his head
Using his consciousness
Just as it gets dark
Shake his cobwebs loose

Chorus
To finish his business
With Zachary's Bullets
Remove the hangman's noose
As he swings on a tree
It would not hold
Him and the,old man's gold

V2
As a branch breaks free
He told his soul to go
And it left in a hurry
He can avenge,old man Billy
He won't feel useless

V3
To kill six bad men 
Who robbed his old friend
They will die penniless
But in much more pain
And they will be headless
 
Chorus
To finish his business
With Zachary's Bullets
Remove the hangman's noose
As he swings on a tree
It would not hold
Him and the,old man's gold

V4
Swinging from a tree
Sure does clear your head
A second chance won't be wasted
Someones gonna lose it
Zak knows how to use it
No more cobwebds to

Chorus
To finish his business
With Zachary's Bullets
Remove the hangman's noose
As he swings on a tree
It would not hold
Him and the,old man's gold

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 12:30:15 PM

Hi PVD wow and many thanks I appreciate it. Everyone did such a fantastic job on this song. Thank you PVD your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Captain fantastic on March 04, 2011, 12:48:47 PM

Smokin geetar,good fun...who is zach though ?

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 01:38:14 PM

Hi Captain Fantastic wow and many thanks. 'Zak Bullets' is a short story that I've been working on for awhile  :). The song came to me first and then the short story. Thank you Captain your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 04, 2011, 01:58:05 PM

 8)  ;D   

I was wondering who Zach is too!  ;D


Thanks for the nice comments, everybody!! :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jwoo10 on March 04, 2011, 02:48:07 PM

Turned out nice folks!  :)  8)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 04, 2011, 02:59:07 PM

Nice one everyone! Vox are nice and gritty!! (that is a good thing!!)  :)
Great job all!!! 8)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 03:01:59 PM

Hi R4M Wow and many thanks. You did such an awsome job with the music  :). I'm playing this cool song again this evening. You did a fantastic job! Thank you R4M your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 03:03:42 PM

Hi JWOO10 Wow and many thanks you did such an awsome job on the drums  :). Thank you JWOO10 your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Errol on March 04, 2011, 03:04:54 PM

Great job guys! LOVE the guitars and drums. Great VOX too! :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 03:10:03 PM

Hi Chescook wow and many thanks. Yep I agree music sounds awsome don't it? Thank you Chescook your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 04, 2011, 03:51:23 PM

BTW....GREAT job by Tricia peicing the whole thing together! I had doubts that it could come together. ;)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 04, 2011, 04:03:59 PM

Quote from: r4m on March 04, 2011, 03:51:23 PM

BTW....GREAT job by Tricia peicing the whole thing together! I had doubts that it could come together. ;)

 ;) It was nothin'.  ^-^  ;D ;D

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Albino on March 04, 2011, 05:12:30 PM

Fantastic song guys, really sounds good. Some great work by everyone.

Love the rocking out @3:40 ish. Looks like I missed out on a gem here ???

@Jwoo....Yes the ride, floor tom thing worked a treat .

Great vox Tricia  ^-^

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 04, 2011, 05:30:54 PM

Thanks Albino and Chesook!  :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 04, 2011, 05:38:42 PM

edit

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 04, 2011, 05:56:31 PM

Oh...crud!!!!!
I just noticed that my outboard processor was turned off during mixdown which cut out the delay on the vox!!
Supprised nobody caught it!!! I think it is a cool addition.
Sorry.....I'll get fixed and posted!!  :(

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: musobass on March 04, 2011, 06:35:33 PM

Don't know what happened to my post, so I'll post again. :D Awesome job everyone!! :) 8)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 04, 2011, 06:51:24 PM

Jimmy
I posted the correct mix in the song thread. If you could move them over here in the finished that would be cool.
thanks
 Bill

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 04, 2011, 06:53:36 PM

Great bass Mike.  Especially rockin out the ending!!! ;)

John
Yer a flippin machine!!! :D

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 04, 2011, 07:24:21 PM

Hi Bill and everyone okay I just replaced the new file that Bill posted and it sounds really cool  :) I like it. I'm still having a little trouble getting the Ape File in there. Bill could you post the link to Ape file again I much appreciate it. You did a fantastic job! Thank you Bill your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 04, 2011, 07:33:59 PM

Quote from: r4m on March 04, 2011, 05:56:31 PM

Oh...crud!!!!!
I just noticed that my outboard processor was turned off during mixdown which cut out the delay on the vox!!
Supprised nobody caught it!!! I think it is a cool addition.
Sorry.....I'll get fixed and posted!!  :(

I caught it, but assumed you changed your mind about it.  ;D

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Billy on March 06, 2011, 01:58:20 AM

Congratulations, Jimmy on your first completed collaboration. And a fine song it is too. Though I like the original title better - it has more impact and rolls off the tongue nicely.

Bill - your vision and guitar virtuosity certainly adds a professional dimension and with Mr. Wooten on drums, you can't go wrong. Strong fluent bass which is tight and well played throughout. As usual, Tricia adds her own unique rock chic style and gives good interpretation of the lyrics.

I appreciate the work that went into to this collab. Well done!

Billy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 06, 2011, 02:20:34 AM

Hi Billy wow and many thanks I appreciate it  :). This song was a lot of fun between (R4M. Tricia, Mike, Jwoo10) everyone did a fantastic job. I went ahead and shortened the title tho  :) at the last minute. That was the orignal title when I was writing the lyrics later on I changed it to 'Zachary's Bullets'. But I like both songtitles tho. Thank you Billy your friend Jimmy

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: stoman on March 06, 2011, 03:11:06 AM

Wow, guys, this is a neat little rocker! Very nice delivery, and great vocals, Tricia!

Regards,
  Steffen

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: r4m on March 06, 2011, 06:35:21 AM

Thanks everyone!! :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 06, 2011, 07:00:59 AM

Thanks for the nice words, friends!

I still call it "Zachary's Bullets".  ;D

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: NickT on March 06, 2011, 11:47:18 AM

Nice job all and congrats Jimmy on your first finished collab!

Very cool!

Nick

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 06, 2011, 12:01:42 PM

Hi Nick wow and many thanks I appreciate it  :). I was playing this cool song again this morning with R4m, Mike, and JWOO10 awsome music and Tricia's awsome vocals. Everyone did such a Fantastic job! It was a lot of fun posting my first finished collab. Thank you Nick your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 06, 2011, 03:50:20 PM

Great way to get your first song done at MCS

A cool rocking track..my son is called also Zack, though he is only two he was headbanging to this one  ;D

CD

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 06, 2011, 03:54:45 PM

Quote from: CosmicDolphin on March 06, 2011, 03:50:20 PM

Great way to get your first song done at MCS

A cool rocking track..my son is called also Zack, though he is only two he was headbanging to this one  ;D

CD

 :o He's 2 already??! Wow, time flies!  :)

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 06, 2011, 04:11:00 PM

Quote from: Tricia41 on March 06, 2011, 03:54:45 PM

Quote from: CosmicDolphin on March 06, 2011, 03:50:20 PM

Great way to get your first song done at MCS

A cool rocking track..my son is called also Zack, though he is only two he was headbanging to this one  ;D

CD

 :o He's 2 already??! Wow, time flies!  :)

Yeah , he's a cheeky little sod !

I keep telling the kids to grow down...not up  >:D

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 06, 2011, 04:21:37 PM

Hi CosmicDolphin wow and many thanks I appreciate it. You know Zachary was the first name I thought of for this song  :). Some other ones came to mind but I knew Zachary would work our best with the story. You know I wish you could of seen my Fiance Merrie's face when I told her I wanted five children she was shocked  :). Thank you CosmicDolphin your friend Jimmy.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on March 09, 2011, 06:37:08 AM

I'm enjoying this one guys, well done.  And as with the rest Jimmy, congrats on your first completed song.  And Tricia, just keeps getting better and better.

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 09, 2011, 06:48:11 AM

 :-[ :) awww

Title: Re: Zak's Bullets! (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWoo10)
Post by: jfreed18 on March 09, 2011, 10:46:09 AM

Hi Casia wow and many thanks I appreciate it  :). (R4M, Tricia, Mike, JWOO10) All did a terrific job on this cool song. I had a lot of fun posting my first finish song and learning the steps  :). Thank you Casia your friend Jimmy.