Musicians Collaboration Studio
Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: jfreed18 on July 20, 2011, 07:08:36 PM
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Hi Everyone here is a new fun project finished by (Neil, Tricia and I) called "Bobby's Girl Says Maybe). Neil did a terrific job on the music it's really cool and Tricia did a terrific job on the vocals and the changes in the lyrics You Guys Rock!. But I want to say many thanks to Tricia and Neil I had a lot of fun working on this song. You guys both did a fantastic job! Thank you Everyone your friend Jimmy.
Bobby's Girl Says Maybe
V1:
Bobby's in the garage on Friday
He's working up an appetite lately
His work ethic it's not normal
His boss Floyd looks at him oddly
(Chorus)
Doing everybody's job working faster
He can't wait for lunchtime at the diner
Talk to a waitress he's got a eye on
Order something crazy,
hoping Bobby's Girl Says Maybe..
V2:
He's telling his boys, today is the day
Good luck will be coming his way
Each of them handed him their money
Let him do what ever makes him happy
(Chorus)
Doing everybody's job working faster
He can't wait for lunchtime at the diner
Talk to a waitress he's got a eye on
Order something crazy,
hoping Bobby's Girl Says Maybe..
Bridge:
His friends hear a bell, ring across the street
They sit anxious in their seats
Seeing Bobby coming out smiling happily
(Chorus)
Doing everybody's job working faster
He can't wait for lunchtime at the diner
Talk to a waitress he's got a eye on
Order something crazy,
hoping Bobby's Girl Says Maybe..
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Wow guys!
I don't know anything about Bobby's Girl; but, "Jimmy's girl" has never sounded better...Lovely work Tricia! ;D
Jimmy, a very cool lyric...It flows great and tells a delightful story that everyone can relate too! 8) Luv it!
Neil, the music/melody work perfect! You gotta be proud of this little gem!
:)
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Thanks Johnny. You're way to kind. :)
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Hi Johnny wow and many thanks I appreciate it :). This song was a lot fun to write and tell a cool story. I have one more country project I'm writing lyrics for I will be posting it soon. Thank you Johnny your friend Jimmy.
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Thanks Jimmy and Tricia for the kind words.
look forward to other projects..will also b
glad to take a look at the next country one..
and thanks johnny for ur comment regards NEIL
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Very nice everyone, Tricia you're awesome. :D :D :D
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Thanks, but I don't feel awesome. :P ;D
This might be the quickest collab ever. :)
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HI Dan and Tricia and thanks again.. and yes
this could b the quickest collab.. i know what u
mean. im working with another here .. and some
do take a long time lo..but u again did a great
job considering no country music experience....
per say .. again thanks best regards NEIL
PS..DAN . THAT guitar trac k i will start work on this
weekend .. think that little bit u did in the begging of
this project could have possiblilites. and dan any time
u need keys on whatever project i am open for it.
thanks your friend NEIL
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HI Dan and Tricia and thanks again.. and yes
this could b the quickest collab.. i know what u
mean. im working with another here .. and some
do take a long time lo..but u again did a great
job considering no country music experience....
per say .. again thanks best regards NEIL
PS..DAN . THAT guitar trac k i will start work on this
weekend .. think that little bit u did in the begging of
this project could have possiblilites. and dan any time
u need keys on whatever project i am open for it.
thanks your friend NEIL
Thanks. I do have some experience collabbing on country songs, It's just that I really don't like country music! :D
I know it's popular, but I just can't stand it. I'm glad this went well, but no more country for me. ;D
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Thanks Tricia we understand. wanna do some ZZTOPP LAGRANGE MUSIC
OR JANIS JOPLIN ....I KNOW BETTER YET. COME TO MY WINDOW..
MELISSA ETHRIDGE... JUST KIDDING. THANKS FOR HELPING THOUGH
TAKE CARE AND STAY COOL . BEST REGARDS NEIL
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Thanks Tricia we understand. wanna do some ZZTOPP LAGRANGE MUSIC
OR JANIS JOPLIN ....I KNOW BETTER YET. COME TO MY WINDOW..
MELISSA ETHRIDGE... JUST KIDDING. THANKS FOR HELPING THOUGH
TAKE CARE AND STAY COOL . BEST REGARDS NEIL
;D
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Ok Neil thanks, i will sure get to you when i need some chords idea. ;)
Great job by the way. :D
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cool song guys, nice story and great vocals as usual by Tricia!
Hey Tricia is this really country? I can understand that you don't like country music. 2007 me and my wife and daughter and our american friends we drove from Kentucky to Florida by car and had the radio on. It was aweful. Every station played the same aweful country music songs and I thought how can it be? Every singer sounded EXACTLY the same like each other. Clones! I mean not that the radio stations in Europe play better music ;D but that was strange, really!
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Thanks for the kind comment. and ur story about flordia or down
south anywhere u go is country music...hey i wil listen to country
all day if the only choice was country or rap lo..but thanks. for
listening regards NEIL.
Look foward to ever onward being completed . holger any new on that
again regards NEIL
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cool song guys, nice story and great vocals as usual by Tricia!
Hey Tricia is this really country? I can understand that you don't like country music. 2007 me and my wife and daughter and our american friends we drove from Kentucky to Florida by car and had the radio on. It was aweful. Every station played the same aweful country music songs and I thought how can it be? Every singer sounded EXACTLY the same like each other. Clones! I mean not that the radio stations in Europe play better music ;D but that was strange, really!
hmm, I know what you mean. Around here people love it or hate country. But I respect country music's right to exist! ;D ;D ;D
Gimme rock, lol
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Enjoyed this listen!
Nice job gang!
Nick
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Eh eh, funny organ sound like the old times, I like it... Different song but nice.
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HI GENTLEMEN
THANKS for the comment s appreciate your feedback
by the way . the organ i used on my korg , was a old
gospel organ sound with a combine hammond to it to
give it somewhat of what we call a cheesy sound from the
60 s. done on purpose. thanks though best regards NEIL
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A fun track guys ... well done all
Ian
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Thanks for the kind compliment. it was a fun track
and sortof a retro flash back to th e old days of country
best regards NEIL
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Fun Tune ;)
I think it could have used a few more real instruments...bass and drums would let it shine, and the vocal sounds really distant, I could have got into it more if there was less reverb on Tricia's voice. Good little song. Thanks for the listen guys.
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