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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: toadman on August 15, 2011, 06:52:26 AM

Title: Killer
Post by: toadman on August 15, 2011, 06:52:26 AM

This song is supposed to be self explanatory. I hope it translates.

Killer - words & music - toadman (c) 2011

Captain Fantastic - vocals
Mr Mom - lyric adds, moral support
toadman - guits, bass, keys, drum machine.

V1. I feel pressure at the back of my skull, I feel the need once more
      Pick up the keys and turn off the TV, float out the door
      My whole life is an open wound, just a running sore
      Hop in the car and breathe in easy, just like before

V2. I was born with no remorse, I know the Mark of Cain
      And I have The Finger of God on my forehead, inflicting pain
      When I dream it always seems blood pours like rain
      Sit in the car and breathe in easy, here we go again

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: Tricia41 on August 15, 2011, 08:03:37 AM

CAn you post an mp3, so we can all listen?  :) Thanks!

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: toadman on August 15, 2011, 08:11:06 AM

Sorry Tricia,
Still getting used to what the go is.
1 x mp3, 1 x wma.
                                                    toad

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: Tricia41 on August 15, 2011, 08:14:33 AM

Sounds really cool guys.  :) Nice vocals, Ralph!

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: toadman on August 15, 2011, 08:29:28 AM

Thanks Tricia.
I think the Captain gave Joey (RIP) a run for his money there.
                                                           toad
                                       
                                                 

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: cyclone on August 15, 2011, 08:56:02 AM

This is cool I could hear this on the radio from an encharted desert isle. :)
Cyclone

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: Mr. Mom on August 15, 2011, 09:35:24 AM

Sounds great Mick! I think you missed giving yourself credit in the above post for your lyrics... my contribution was just a minor suggestion, all the words Ralph sang are yours - and very good by the way.

You singing on this was perfect Ralph, then it just got better with whatever Mick did in the mix. :) 8)

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: toadman on August 15, 2011, 11:17:49 AM

Thanks, buddy. I fixed it.
Never let a chance to claim credit slip by, I say.
                                                                    toad

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: Studioplayer on August 15, 2011, 06:12:57 PM

Nice rocker!! I like the building intro. Cool stuff guys!  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: Captain fantastic on August 16, 2011, 10:54:46 AM

Quote from: Tricia41 on August 15, 2011, 08:14:33 AM

Sounds really cool guys.  :) Nice vocals, Ralph!

Thanks Tricia,I just had a stab at,luckily it was only a few lines.

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: Captain fantastic on August 16, 2011, 10:58:29 AM

Quote from: Mr. Mom on August 15, 2011, 09:35:24 AM

Sounds great Mick! I think you missed giving yourself credit in the above post for your lyrics... my contribution was just a minor suggestion, all the words Ralph sang are yours - and very good by the way.

You singing on this was perfect Ralph, then it just got better with whatever Mick did in the mix. :) 8)

Thanks John,you know how I feel about singing,I do it through gritted teeth !

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: mickbrit55 on August 16, 2011, 11:17:04 AM

Love this rocker! Great intro and outro ... middle sounds a tad muddy though. Good job guys!

Mick.

Title: Re: Killer
Post by: CosmicDolphin on August 19, 2011, 03:47:40 PM

Nice intro  :)

I like the vocal delivery, and interesting FX

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