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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Captain fantastic on November 15, 2011, 01:10:36 PM

Title: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 15, 2011, 01:10:36 PM
THE WONDERFUL CLIRMA ON VOCALS & MELODY, PAUL (PVD) IS THE MASTERFUL LYRICIST & I JUST FIDDLED AROUND, CHEERS BOYS. HERE IS A WAV & AN WMA
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: mickbrit55 on November 15, 2011, 01:49:58 PM
Hey, nice job! Simple idea but very effective. Reminded me a lot of The Doors and I could imagine this as a backing track for a Vietnam war movie. Great lyrics, vocals and the guitar work is mesmerizing. Loved it :)

Mick.
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Tricia41 on November 15, 2011, 02:31:34 PM
Sounds cool!   8)
 Maybe Paul will post the lyrics here?  ??? :)
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Post by: Studioplayer on November 15, 2011, 03:32:53 PM
Interesting piece of music. Good job guys. The vocals fit really well.  :)

The lyrics should be posted though. They're just as important as the music.   ;)

Dave
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 15, 2011, 03:34:15 PM

Break My Fall

(v1)
With each footstep it gets darker
With each heartbeat I get older
Without you I'm nowhere
(v2)
Reaching with all my might
Reaching for you every night
Without you it's a nightmare

(chorus)
Memories, memories
That are growing thin
The pain is too strong
From deep within
Holding onto you
Would solve it all
Save our love
Break my fall
Oh, please break my fall

(v3)
Remember when we were one
Intertwined before the night was done
Waiting for the sun to rise

(v4)
Everything was vibrant and clear
All the shadows disappeared
We saw with one set of eyes

(chorus)
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 15, 2011, 03:36:18 PM
Hey, copied & pasted Pauls words, Its great to have another singer on the site, I hope we get to hear a lot more of the man
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: PVD on November 15, 2011, 04:44:39 PM
This is the lyric as C sang it:

(v1)
With each footstep it gets darker
With each heartbeat I get older
Without you I'm nowhere
(v2)
Reaching with all my might
Reaching for you every night
Without you it's a nightmare (it's a nightmare)

(chorus)
Memories
That are growing thin
The pain is too strong
From deep within
Holding onto you
Would solve it all
Save our love
And break my fall
Break my fall

(v3)
Remember when we were one
Intertwined before the night was done
Waiting for the sun to rise
(v4)
Everything was vibrant and clear
All the shadows disappeared
We saw with one set of eyes

(chorus) (spoken)
Memories, memories
That are growing thin
The pain is too strong
From deep within
Holding onto you
Would solve it all
Save our love
Please break my fall

(repeat v1)

(repeat v2)

(chorus)
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: PVD on November 15, 2011, 04:52:18 PM
Ralph & C:

Really like this, C did a great job on creating the pain and mystery with his delivery.  Tks for allowing me to be involved.

Paul
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Tricia41 on November 15, 2011, 05:09:55 PM
Nice lyrics too!  :)
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Post by: Johnny on November 15, 2011, 08:39:48 PM
Ralph,

it's a very difficult thing to pull off something "unique". but you seem to do it time and time again...kudos :)

Clirma, your vocal is superb...

Paul..."gifted work", my friend

Cheers ev'ryone!
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 16, 2011, 02:42:59 AM
Johnny you're too kind, Paul, it was an honour to have you aboard.
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: clirma on November 16, 2011, 03:35:25 AM
Nice sad song. Not bad for our first song
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 16, 2011, 09:32:55 AM
Everyone I played it to liked it
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Paulo on November 16, 2011, 09:35:23 AM
Quote from: clirma on November 16, 2011, 03:35:25 AM
Nice sad song. Not bad for our first song

I'm not sad, I'm really happy  :)... nice song, folks.
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: cyclone on November 16, 2011, 10:24:59 AM
Turned out great nice job R and C.
Cyclone
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Post by: Errol on November 16, 2011, 10:42:17 AM
Really distictive. Love the driving beat. Sounds great!  :)
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: soulfrontier on November 21, 2011, 03:36:07 AM
Quote from: mickbrit55 on November 15, 2011, 01:49:58 PM
Hey, nice job! Simple idea but very effective. Reminded me a lot of The Doors and I could imagine this as a backing track for a Vietnam war movie. Great lyrics, vocals and the guitar work is mesmerizing. Loved it :)

Mick.

I'll second that! It has a dark feel. Great work!
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Paulo on November 21, 2011, 04:07:04 AM
Different but really nice.
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 21, 2011, 05:59:10 AM
I find it a hard to be different, but it usually happens when I'm not trying.
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: clirma on November 22, 2011, 07:55:18 PM
I like Lucid dreaming version too
Title: Re: BREAK MY FALL
Post by: Captain fantastic on November 23, 2011, 03:00:24 AM
She reminds me of Kate bush.