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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: mickbrit55 on March 23, 2012, 09:47:32 PM

Title: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on March 23, 2012, 09:47:32 PM
This is the first part of a 3 part suite - Frozen Strings. Paul was originally inspired to write after watching a video that I uploaded. The inspiration then jumped to Andy who came up with the original music. George jumped on board with his powerful voice and I added some noodling.

We all sincerely hope that you enjoy the result.

Lyrics : Paul (PVD)
Music, Bass, Drums and Strings : Andy (AndyG)
Vocals and Melody : George (GuitarGeorge)
Guitars and Mixing : Mick (MickBrit55)

A big thank you goes out to Mark (CD) for his helpful comments and support during the mixing stage. Cheers mate :)

Frozen Strings

(v1)
The white is so blinding but I can't close my eyes
My guitar speaks in hurried phrases for fear of freezing
My fingers are numb but they keep playing on
The sounds echo off the ice and are so, so pleasing

(v2)
Follow my movements through an icy fortress
The frost gods have left the music frozen in the snow
I can feel it through the strings freezing my soul
The air is standing still, even the wind cannot blow

(chorus)
So hurry now
It's something you've never felt
Don't worry now
Coz it will never melt
Listen as my guitar sings
Wondrous things played on frozen strings, on frozen strings

(bridge)
The cold speaks through the whispering wind
I can feel the icy touch so deep within
As it wraps around me and covers my skin

(v3)
Watch the moon bow down to this glorious sound
There's no choice but to surrender to the chilly night
Let the cold grab you now, it will keep you warm
As you move through the many shades of white

(chorus)
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: AndyG6508 on March 23, 2012, 10:03:35 PM
Hi Mick,

Good to see this one completed. Paul and George excelled with the lyric and singing, but you should take a bow for ably skippering the ship across the frozen wasteland - your contributions on guitar, overall sonics, effects and mixing made this song wonderful to listen to!!

Great job again.

Cheers
Andy
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on March 24, 2012, 01:43:49 AM
Hi Mick,

Good to see this one completed. Paul and George excelled with the lyric and singing, but you should take a bow for ably skippering the ship across the frozen wasteland - your contributions on guitar, overall sonics, effects and mixing made this song wonderful to listen to!!

Great job again.

Cheers
Andy

Thanks mate, but CD's help was invaluable. He pushed me to put in that important last 10%. All the performances were first rate so it made the mixing easier :)

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 24, 2012, 05:04:44 AM
Well done guys, nice performances all around - the final mix sounds much more like a 'song' than a collection of parts...it's the last 10% effort that can make it sound 50% better  >:D

It has a nice atmosphere now without sounding like you're in a cave.

Look forward to part 2

CD
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: stoman on March 24, 2012, 05:47:56 AM
I second what Mark says. And I love your "noodeling"! ;)

I'd probably prefer the vocals a little less upfront, but the mix is very good as is. I did not expect that when I listened to a progress mix in Studio "A". But progress mixes are progress mixes. ;)

Perfect job by everybody. I'l love to hear George's vocals more often (and your guitar which is killer as usual).

Andy has a good hand for great music. I like all his compositions.

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on March 24, 2012, 07:16:42 AM
Thanks Mark and Steffen, really means a lot to me on your comments for the mix. Seems like a slow process before you make any inroads into mixing properly. I think this tune is a milestone for me, mostly because now I can hear where I went wrong with my older mixes :)

By far the best "tool" I had for the job was working with great guys that came up with excellent performances. Made my job a lot eassier. Thanks again for listening.

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: PVD on March 24, 2012, 08:10:26 AM
Everyone:

This turned out great, I am so impressed how this sounds both with George's vocal and Mick's hard work on the mix.
Excellent experience for me, from Andy's originally compostion as well as the discussions on the lyric.  We'll have to send it to that violinist in that wonderful video that prompted the lyric.

Tks for letting me watch from a distance.

Paul
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: napoleonboot on March 24, 2012, 08:52:13 AM
I enjoyed being part of this, well done all!
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: AndyG6508 on March 26, 2012, 10:03:48 AM
Oh thats very kind of you to say, Steffen, much appreciated :)

Andy

Andy has a good hand for great music. I like all his compositions.

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: Studioplayer on March 26, 2012, 04:00:17 PM
OK.. That was a very cool song. Top notch stuff guys. George really sounds great on this and I love that Floyd type of guitar story telling. The song really builds and it really kept my interest as it went along. One of the better tunes here I would say. Sounds great!!  8) 8) 8)
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on March 26, 2012, 04:42:58 PM
OK.. That was a very cool song. Top notch stuff guys. George really sounds great on this and I love that Floyd type of guitar story telling. The song really builds and it really kept my interest as it went along. One of the better tunes here I would say. Sounds great!!  8) 8) 8)

Thank you Dave, I'm glad you enjoyed the listen and your comments are very much appreciated. Yeah, who would have thought 6-7 months ago that George had that great big voice eh? lol. He nails it every time too.

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: napoleonboot on March 26, 2012, 04:49:09 PM
Thanks guys! it is a team effort though, and the whole team was great on this.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: Tricia41 on April 01, 2012, 09:10:06 AM
WOW! Awesome!. Moving song. Love it all around. Bass is awesome, Andy.  8)
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on April 01, 2012, 09:16:47 AM
WOW! Awesome!. Moving song. Love it all around. Bass is awesome, Andy.  8)

Thanks for listening Tricia :) Andy's bass is killer on this song ... but he is a serial killer on part II.

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: Tricia41 on April 01, 2012, 09:34:40 AM
oooooh!  ^-^ I can't wait!
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on April 05, 2012, 12:46:18 PM
Bumping this to see if we can get some more input before it disapears down the Page 2 shoot! :)

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: Mr. Mom on April 05, 2012, 01:39:47 PM
All I can tell you Mick is that this song sends a chill up my spine every time I hear it... and that's a good thing. :) :)
How could any lyricist not fall in love with these words? And I'm positive every guitar player absolutely can picture themselves as the guitarist in this tale. This whole series would be excellent as a music video, even if it's just muvizu. 8)
 
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 05, 2012, 02:23:01 PM
Thanks John....Part II and III have been posted as well to complete the "winter" suite :).

Andy
All I can tell you Mick is that this song sends a chill up my spine every time I hear it... and that's a good thing. :) :)
How could any lyricist not fall in love with these words? And I'm positive every guitar player absolutely can picture themselves as the guitarist in this tale. This whole series would be excellent as a music video, even if it's just muvizu. 8)
 
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: docmidnite on April 06, 2012, 09:18:17 AM
Very impressive!!!
George never sang softer, luv` it!!!!!

And the start of the solo at 2:47 is frigging AWSOME, Mick!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on April 06, 2012, 12:29:33 PM
All I can tell you Mick is that this song sends a chill up my spine every time I hear it... and that's a good thing. :) :)
How could any lyricist not fall in love with these words? And I'm positive every guitar player absolutely can picture themselves as the guitarist in this tale. This whole series would be excellent as a music video, even if it's just muvizu. 8)
 

Thanks a lot, John. Yeah, Paul really captured the mood for this one big time, just love those lyrics! In fact the lyrics on all 3 of the tracks were excpetional. Thanks for listening :)

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on April 06, 2012, 12:31:46 PM
Very impressive!!!
George never sang softer, luv` it!!!!!

And the start of the solo at 2:47 is frigging AWSOME, Mick!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cheers for listening, Henry :) George really put out a "rock opera" feel to these 3 tracks ... and thoroughly enjoyed it I may add :) Glad you enjoyed the solo ... thats what us guitarists really listen for right? LOL.

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: soulfrontier on April 07, 2012, 05:40:24 AM
Hey Mick and gang that's a great start with this part, looking forward to listen to the other ones!
Outstanding vocals and guitar solo!
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: PVD on April 15, 2012, 11:54:11 AM
A few off site comments:

"Wonderful mood with emotional vocals. Frozen Strings is a wonderful Ballad and the collabfriends all made a very good job. I will play this song Monday in my show".
Inge

"beautiful, magical athmoshere. romantic "frozen" song! respect"!
Rainer Struck

"lyrical and strong feel to this, great touch on guitar and the vocal reminds of some old baker gurvitz army stuff. great storied collab here guys"
Waveman

Paul

Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on April 15, 2012, 04:35:12 PM
A few off site comments:

"Wonderful mood with emotional vocals. Frozen Strings is a wonderful Ballad and the collabfriends all made a very good job. I will play this song Monday in my show".
Inge

"beautiful, magical athmoshere. romantic "frozen" song! respect"!
Rainer Struck

"lyrical and strong feel to this, great touch on guitar and the vocal reminds of some old baker gurvitz army stuff. great storied collab here guys"
Waveman

Paul



That's great Paul. What show?

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: Billy on April 16, 2012, 05:44:35 AM
Wonderful collaboration guys.

I'm glad to hear George stepping up to the mic and smashing those lyrics for six. A fine performance, sir.

Mick, great sound on that guitar....... make it sing, bruvva.

All comes together really well and very impressive, all of you.

Billy.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: mickbrit55 on April 16, 2012, 09:47:52 AM
Wonderful collaboration guys.

I'm glad to hear George stepping up to the mic and smashing those lyrics for six. A fine performance, sir.

Mick, great sound on that guitar....... make it sing, bruvva.

All comes together really well and very impressive, all of you.

Billy.

Thanks Billy. Appreciate you listening and for the kind comments.

Mick.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: musicfort on April 22, 2012, 03:39:33 PM
Like this tune a lot. Sounds great. George you did it again man.
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: snowdoguk on May 09, 2012, 10:27:01 PM
top song guys, well done
Title: Re: Frozen Strings Part I
Post by: PVD on May 09, 2012, 10:32:18 PM
Mike:

Tks, this one was so well done, everything came together so well, btw the lyric was written while watching a video Mick B. posted.

We are about due for one sometime soon I hope.  I've been busy with a consulting job and lost a little muse lately, but it truly has never dried up.

Paul