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Title: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: Donna on September 22, 2012, 01:22:10 PM
The lyric was penned last year in February, and underwent a few revisions before being sent off to Billy for his magic.  ;) Then last week, Rosalind added her scrumptious, soulful vocals.
I hope you enjoy it.  :)

Billy Playle: music/arrangement/instrumentation/production
Rosalind Loveluck: vocals
Donna Devine: lyric

HEART PLEASE BREAK

V1
Was it all for nothing?
Was it a lie
Don't I need to cry
Now that he's gone
All this time I thought I loved him
Was I wrong?

Chorus 1
Heart please break
So much at stake
The sea of tears
The salt I've tasted
Heart please break
You need to ache
Or else these years
Have all been wasted

V2
Was it all for nothing?
Was it not real
Don't I need to heal
Now that he's gone?
All this time I thought I loved him
Was I wrong?

Chorus 2
Heart please break
So much at stake
The sea of tears
The salt I've tasted
Heart please break
You need to ache
Or else these years
Have all been ...

Bridge
Was it an illusion
Heart please break
It's hard to make
The switch to truth
From self-delusion

Chorus 3
Heart please break
So much at stake
The sea of tears
The salt I've tasted
Heart please break
You need to ache
Or else these years
Have all been wasted

Tag
All this time
I thought I loved him
I was wrong

�2011-2012 Donna Devine
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: docmidnite on September 24, 2012, 11:46:36 AM
Beautiful :'(
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: Paulo on September 24, 2012, 11:56:09 AM
Beautiful :'(

I second that, beautifull.

Billy is probably the best musicians I've ever known.
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: PVD on September 24, 2012, 09:04:10 PM
I third that, love the chorus.

Well done.

Paul
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: Donna on October 01, 2012, 01:41:25 PM
Doc, Paulo, and Paul, thanks so much for giving this a listen.  :) I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Indeed, Billy and Rosalind did a superb job.  :)

Donna
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on October 06, 2012, 08:08:54 AM
Wow , this sounds really professional

What else can yo expect when I see Sir Billy was involved.  Great performances / arrangement - really let's the emotion shine through.

CD
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: Donna on October 19, 2012, 10:33:17 AM
Thank you, CD.  :) 

Donna
Title: Re: Heart Please Break (Billy/Rosalind/Donna)
Post by: DarleneMcLyrics on October 20, 2012, 10:42:19 AM
Lovely,,,Loved the lyric