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Title: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on December 12, 2012, 02:08:34 PM
This one has been around the block a few times for such a simple song but I am happy to call this finished. I am extremely grateful to Steffen who has worked his magic to help me get this to completion. Many thanks too to Appeluza - Rob Talbert who helped get it started on guitar. CD also helped out with an earlier mix before the vocals changed.

Mix, Strings and Bass: Steffen Offerman
Guitars: Rob Talbert
Words, Music & Vocals: Errol Chugg

A Tear Falls

Staying in this lonely room
Listening to the wind and rain
I lie awake
With swirling thoughts I can't explain

All the words I never said
Knowing I can't put things right
So I contemplate
The golden strands of morning light

And a tear falls
Another tear falls
When the emptiness calls
A tear falls
Another tear falls
My tears fall
For you

At night I walk alone
And the feeling comes again
I then call your name
And search the truth from deep within

The mistakes I know I made
And the schemes I had to try
Are now put away
With all the hopes we kissed goodbye

Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Tricia41 on December 12, 2012, 05:05:39 PM
Very nice, Erroll!  :) :)
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on December 12, 2012, 05:22:21 PM
Very nice, Erroll!  :) :)

Thank you Tricia. And thanks for listening.   :)
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: PVD on December 13, 2012, 08:24:32 AM
Errol:

Nice

Paul
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on December 13, 2012, 10:26:36 AM
Thanks Paul!  :)
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: stoman on December 13, 2012, 11:01:51 AM
My favorite song of yours, Errol! And you have a lot of beautiful songs.

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on December 13, 2012, 11:10:37 AM
My favorite song of yours, Errol! And you have a lot of beautiful songs.

Regards,
  Steffen

Thank you Steffen - your help on this was way beyong the call of duty. I hugely appreciate your support and input.  :)
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Casia - lyricist on December 13, 2012, 08:35:57 PM
Brings tears to my eyes ... absolutely beautiful.
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on December 13, 2012, 09:46:11 PM
That's very nice of you, Casia. Thank you very much!  :)
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: docmidnite on December 19, 2012, 01:25:27 AM
Very nice, Errol.
Your voice gains depth with each and every song!
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Post by: soulfrontier on December 19, 2012, 07:07:57 AM
This is sooo beautiful Errol! Kudos, outstanding song. And again song and your voice reminds me of Stephen Duffy and  the Lilac Time.
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on December 19, 2012, 07:13:10 AM
Thank you very much guys. The kind comments are much appreciated.  :)
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: CosmicDolphin on January 06, 2013, 04:48:48 AM
Hey I remember this one....long time in the finishing !

It's a very sweet song, I'm glad you got it don in the end.

CD
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Paulo on January 11, 2013, 04:23:49 PM
Beautifull... so simple and clean... Most of the times, it just what we need, simple and clean.
Title: Re: A Tear Falls
Post by: Errol on January 11, 2013, 05:50:16 PM
Thanks guys!!  :)