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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: mickbrit55 on February 17, 2013, 03:44:59 PM

Title: Knock Knock
Post by: mickbrit55 on February 17, 2013, 03:44:59 PM

Something a little bit different for me, hope you like it :)

Acoustic Guitar : Cyclone
Vocals : Rightonthemark
Drums : Bobby
Synth : Songsparrow
Music, lyrics, guitars, bass, keyboards, synths : Mickbrit55

Knock Knock

Hardened hearts like over baked bread
Bring me back to what she said, she said
Tinsel dreams and play "knock-knock"
Scissors, paper, hard as rock, oh yeah

Time spent wondering if she cared
Self doubt and lust so soon are paired, repaired
Working hard to pick your lock
Scissors, paper, hard as rock

Your heart is a hardened triumph waiting for the dawn
Like a feather giant that views the field with scorn
And broken pillars adorn your flanks as the ship lies at the dock
You play the game and break the rules
Scissors, paper, hard as rock

Running, tumbling through the halls
Screaming, crying through it all, that's all
The game becomes a nightmare block
Paper, scissors, hard as rock, oh yeah

And a light shines through the battlements
I'm ready to fall in love (knock-knock)
With a dream of heady refinement
Cast fitfully with the dove (knock-knock)
This is not a dream, it is just a dream (knock-knock)

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: Bobby Watson on February 17, 2013, 05:06:16 PM

Nice head banger!  8)

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: rightonthemark on February 17, 2013, 05:23:02 PM

Great tune Mick.
Glad to see this one finished.
And with the additions.
Nice mix too.
Thanks for letting me be a part.

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: songsparrow on February 18, 2013, 11:30:59 AM

 :) Excellent!

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: Errol on February 18, 2013, 11:34:34 AM

Nice tune. The verse melody is very interesting and catchy. Magic guitar solo and great re-connection afterwards.   :)

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: Tricia41 on February 19, 2013, 06:08:32 AM

Nice work guys!  Very different. I didn't know you played keys, Mick! Cool!

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: Paulo on February 19, 2013, 11:42:37 AM

Oh, it's not something I was expecting from Mick but it's cool... I can't do a song like this, it takes some feel that I don't have... Sounds good.

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: mickbrit55 on February 21, 2013, 07:51:02 PM

Thanks for all the comments ... mucho appreciated! :)

Mick.

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: Billy on February 24, 2013, 01:18:27 AM

I like the retro feel to this, guys.

Really like the vocals........works so well.

Nice one.

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: mickbrit55 on February 24, 2013, 07:04:04 AM

Quote from: Billy on February 24, 2013, 01:18:27 AM

I like the retro feel to this, guys.

Really like the vocals........works so well.

Nice one.

Thanks Billy. I agree, Marks vox on this really added to the retro feel :)

Mick.

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: rightonthemark on February 24, 2013, 12:39:18 PM

Wow. Thanks guys.
I'm still not that comfortable as a singer.
All i hear are the imperfections.
But i think i am getting better.
Thanks again.
Mark

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: docmidnite on February 26, 2013, 07:28:25 AM

Cool retro feel!

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: cyclone on February 26, 2013, 10:24:39 PM

They just don`t great make songs like this anymore what a shame.Keep on rockin Mick.
Cyclone

Title: Re: Knock Knock
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 24, 2013, 02:42:26 PM

Cool tune Mick  :)

Kinda different - like the guitar shredding in the middle

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