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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: PVD on October 25, 2014, 03:08:35 PM

Title: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: PVD on October 25, 2014, 03:08:35 PM

Don’t Have a Clue

Lyric:  Paul Dempsey
Vocals, Arrangement:  Ray Sharp (Sharpola)
Lead Guitar:  Tim Sharp

(v1)
Sometimes I speak to myself
In a voice very loud
Sometimes I find myself
So lonely in a crowd

(v2)
Maybe there’s a question
I just haven’t found
Maybe there’s an answer
Something profound

(chorus)
But how do I follow a road
That’s been washed away
How do I stop the tears
That flow every day
Without you, without you
I don’t have a clue

(v3)
When did you lose faith in me
Why did you stop believing
Why didn’t you ever tell me
Your reason for leaving

(bridge)
I’m a shamed that I didn’t see your pain
I must have been blind to have missed the signs
What do I do now

(v4)
Sometimes I can feel myself
Hurting right to the bone
Sometimes I can see myself
Growing old and alone

(chorus)

Title: Re: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: NickT on October 27, 2014, 11:14:44 AM

I love it guys!

Might have overcooked the master a little.  >:D Kind of lost the "band" in the bridge.

Performance is spot on. Ray - Vocals sound really good. Tim - very cool guitar work.
Paul - very insightful and interesting lyrics.

Good job!

NickT

Title: Re: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: Paulo on October 27, 2014, 02:18:00 PM

That's a great song, love it.

Title: Re: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: CosmicDolphin on December 07, 2014, 04:40:30 AM

Wow haven't heard Ray for the longest time, nice to hear him again.

Cool song guys..I like the build at 2.24 ...really let's the song take off

Title: Re: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: rightonthemark on December 07, 2014, 08:06:56 PM

haunting...deep...emotional...
great performances.
great sound.
great tune.
great job.
loved it.

Title: Re: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: PVD on December 08, 2014, 11:24:04 AM

Guys:

Tks for the listen and comments, Ray did a great job on this one.

Paul

Title: Re: Don't Have a Clue
Post by: Zax on December 15, 2014, 09:52:49 PM

Nice!!  Enjoyed the listen!

Well done!

Frank