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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: gbm on January 17, 2017, 04:49:42 PM

Title: Timbo
Post by: gbm on January 17, 2017, 04:49:42 PM

Timbo

music and lyrics by Jenny K Brennan

arrangement by me :)


I tried to reason with you in my mind
I talked to you where you couldn't hear me
but nothing changes
no, nothing changes

and what we did to each other
what we failed to discover
'cause I was just as weak, just as scared as you
just as lonely too
and I'm sorry

now we couldn't even talk about it
that final day
no we didn't even understand why
But I suppose that I was
just as wrong for you
as you were wrong for me
and as the sweetness subsided
we had nothing.

we turned to bare memories
from all the pain inside.
we turned to hate, to stone.
we had nothing, we were nothing
there was nothing at all.

I tried to tell myself I didn't lie
oh honey, not really
oh baby believe me
I tried to tell myself he didn't care
oh honey, not really
won't you believe me?

Cause I was just as weak, just as scared as you
just as lonely too
I am sorry

but nothing changes
nothing changes
cause I thought that I was
just as right for you as you were right for me
and as the sweetness subsided

as the sweetness subsided
we knew that was all there was.

Title: Re: Timbo
Post by: stoman on May 27, 2017, 01:23:20 AM

Cool song, great voice, and a very good arrangement. The cheap MIDI sound ... well, you know it yourself: it kills the pleasure. But that's really the only thing I can complain about. Other than that this is really great music.

Title: Re: Timbo
Post by: gbm on May 27, 2017, 08:49:18 AM

Steffen

thanks!

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The cheap MIDI sound

yeah I know,   ::)