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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Reba1994 on September 27, 2020, 12:56:33 PM

Title: I Am The Night
Post by: Reba1994 on September 27, 2020, 12:56:33 PM

I think this song came out spectacular, but I was part of it, so I am biased.  Please take a listen!

Lyrics - Paul Dempsey
Vocals - Rebecca Gay
Composition/Mix/Master - Peter Dieck (off site)

Paul - A personal thank you, as you are so flexible and open with your lyrics.  Your words always inspire me.


Verse 1
I am the night
I follow each day
I am relentless
Nothing you can do nothing you can say
Like a shroud I descend
Silently covering all
There is no shelter
No escape no hiding from nightfall

Chorus
I am the darkest dark
That everyone fears
The bump in the night
That everyone hears
Like a black hole
I absorb the light
I am the night
I am the night, the night

Verse 3
I bring the unknown
Dark corners, uncertainty
Standing on weak knees
You quiver, you melt fearfully
Like a shroud I descend
Silently covering all
There is no shelter
No escape no hiding from nightfall

Chorus

Bridge
Night turns in to early morning
Star light dies and fades to grey
Mists rise for another dawning
Nothing can be done to get in its way
Oooo Aaah
As the sun begins to rise
You stare with bloodshot eyes
While I give way to a new day
But I will return I am the night

Chorus

Title: Re: I Am The Night
Post by: PVD on September 27, 2020, 02:35:50 PM

Reba,

Thanks for giving this one a chance, I like how it was done and the music and your vocals match the mood of this one.

Btw, I never have a problem with lyric changes as long as they don't change the intent.  You as the singer must be comfortable with the phrasing.

Paul

Title: Re: I Am The Night
Post by: AndyG6508 on October 08, 2020, 06:05:33 PM

Reba,

Very epic, this sounds really good! Excellent music and a fantastic vocal!
Andy