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Title: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: Sharpola on October 07, 2010, 05:57:19 AM
Lyrics - MM
Music - Sharpola

The Seven Words

Forgive them, forgive them
They're thy enemy it's true
Forgive them, forgive them
For they know not what they do

Come with me, come with me
I'll Dismiss your wrongs for rights
Come with me, come with me
T'ward the steps of paradise

You once followed me
You once followed me, and bathed in the waters of Jesus
You once followed me
You once followed me, and bathed in the waters of Jesus
And bathed in the waters of Jesus

Mother dear, mother dear
I am not your only son
Mother dear, mother dear
You are hailed the bles-sed one

Father please, father please
I cry out the hells that be
Father please, father please
Why have you forsaken me

If you're parched like me,
If you're parched like me, come thirst in the shadows of Jesus
If you're parched like me,
If you're parched like me, come thirst in the shadows of Jesus
Come thirst in the shadows of Jesus

Finish me, finish me
Have my body in defeat
Finish me, finish me
As redemption is complete

Father please, father please
My spirit will rise to thee
Father please, father please
With thy hands you've taken me

Come and follow me
Come and follow me, and bathe in the waters of Jesus
Come and follow me
Come and follow me, and bathe in the waters of Jesus
And bathe in the waters of Jesus

2010 Sharuab Music
Lyrics 2007 Michael Taub



Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: Mr. Mom on October 07, 2010, 12:19:33 PM
This is beautiful Ray and Michael. :)
It's got that nice soothing Michael Smith feel to it. Your harmonies are great, as are the lyrics! 8)

John


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: Mr. Mom on October 09, 2010, 02:18:29 AM
Just got the "two-thumbs up" and "awesome" from my wife when she listened to this. :) :)


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: NickT on October 09, 2010, 04:34:09 AM
Very nice Ray!

Glad your still working hard. Wish I could find the time!

You and Mike make good music.

Nick


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: Sharpola on October 09, 2010, 06:53:11 AM
Thanks guys!



Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: McLovin on October 10, 2010, 06:58:52 PM
Very smooth composition Ray and Mike.  The vocals harmonies are particularly smooth and love where the string and vox pads enter in the verses!  Nice!


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: nitch on October 11, 2010, 01:54:47 PM
Great job all, not my type of music but I'm feeling it!


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: Thunder on October 13, 2010, 02:17:14 AM
Ray cool tune bro. 8)


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: MM on October 18, 2010, 05:35:44 PM

Great job Ray... you really brought this one to life...

Thanks
Mike


Title: Re: The Seven Words Sharpola / MM
Post by: Paulo on October 18, 2010, 06:59:29 PM
Very cool... Keyboards sounds like Genesis.