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Offline NickT

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This is an Ain't TV song we just finished up. Would love some critiques.

Way Cool
NickT

"...My life just Ain't TV..."

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Sure thing, nailed it Davey Boy and the usual Magic Mister T :) :) :)

The lyrics are -

VERSE 1:
It's you baby
Yeah it's you baby

I'm going round in circles, you want me on the straight and narrow
Conflict of interest you could say, although it surely won't slow
us down in everything we're gonna do today
Forget the time for work, embrace the time for play


PRE CHORUS 1:
I'm your man on a mission
You give me permission
To check out your lock, see if I hold the key
You make it clear, the body language you display
Forget tomorrow, there's so much to do today


CHORUS 1:
You take me higher, like there's no tomorrow coming my way
You leave me breathless, so there's no way I'll be screaming mayday
You push the switches, pull the levers  in my mind
and it's way cool, so cool, so cool

VERSE 2:
It's you baby
You know it's you baby

you provide me with all that's good, that's one thing crystal clear
You make it hard to think straight every time that you are near
Out of murky darkness, you helped me focus on the light
of the burning bridges embers glowing deep into the night


PRE CHORUS 2:
One thing on my mind
Same as yours I think you'll find
I'm your marionette, you pull my strings
Who cares if it's dusk or dawn
We can't deny this feeling driving us on

CHORUS 2:
You cloud my mind as if there's no tomorrow coming my way
You leave me speechless, so there's no way I'll be shouting mayday
You whisper things that scream out deeply in my mind
that are way cool, so cool, so cool


PRE CHORUS 3:
It's hard to focus on anything else
With you dancing in front of me increasing my pulse
The more you keep pushing me
The faster I go
Speed keeps increasing faster and faster and faster and when do I slow?

CHORUS 3:
You give of signals I can't fail to understand
you got the moves that make me putty in your hand
The way things turned out, they're not quite the way I planned
But they're way cool, so cool, so cool

CHORUS 4:
The signs you send me, mean I cannot turn away
Logic goes a begging when your body starts to sway
You treat me like a kid but just don't take me for a fool
That would be no cool, no cool, no cool.

CHORUS 5:
You stoke my fire, leave no tomorrow coming my way
You leave me aching, there's no way of me screaming mayday
You pulled the levers, pushed the switches in my mind
And it's way cool, so cool, so cool, way cool


Guys, we really DO ROCK 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)


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YEAH MAN !!! ROCKS !!!  8) The lead is way cool. Nice stuff guys. Couldn't see any reason why this shouldn't be played on mainstream radio.  :)

Dave


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Sounds Loud e-nuff to me !  :o  Nice Mix Nick

Great work again...Steve you have a great way with lyrics , I think you write some of the best around here without ever slipping in to cliche.

Where are you pulling all these songs from Nick ?  ;D

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Thanks Mark, that means a lot bro, there are some wonderful lyricists here  :)

We just need it pushed into the radio stations breadbaskets guys, I'm sure we can do that :) :)

I'll cross the pond to front this band my friends :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

AintTV rock (as well as all the other projects going down)!

Thanks Dave :)


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What a fantastic song guys...lyrics, performances and sound all top of the line! :)
I agree completely with Dave...should start banging on doors and get this sucker out there ..no reason it shouldn't be....there's no stone unturned on this one..it's a winner for sure!(take an extended leave of absence and go for it boys...you only live once! ;D)
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Totally awesome stuff as always guys!   8)

This would be what, the last song to do? Or got another yet?  Almost dun, eh? 

Can't wait for the album, I'm gonna be in the queue quick for that one!

Dan.


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Thanks,

:)

This was a fun tune. Had some huge hurdles. Thanks for listening!

Nick
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"...My life just Ain't TV..."

www.AintTV.com

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Solid guys.  8)


The heavy rock guitar is thick and reminds me of so many rocks groups. Well played.
Cool bass playing and i like the effect on the bass. Seems tight. There are times when the falsetto voice I wish were doubled.  You got some cool sounds in there and the dynamics is there like a clock on the hour.

Very impressive

Showbird  8)
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