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Watch The Sun Come Up

 

Offline Casia - lyricist

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Lyrics:  Katherine Wong (Casia)
Original composition and vocals:  Tricia Dovidio
Music played and arranged: Bobby Watson

Watch The Sun Come Up

(V1)
I'm stuck in a dream where lovers are blind
A fire burns leaving ashes in my mind
A renegade cloud lingers in my room
Reminds me of my lonely nights

(CHORUS)
Open the door; climb in my bed
Take one step inside my head
You'll see the memories
Of every word we said
I'll walk a perfect line
To show that you're mine
Hold me, just hold me
We'll watch the sun come up

(V2)
Too many sips from my glass of wine
Wild thoughts running through my mind
Whispers that haunt in the middle of the night
Are a part of my secret life

(CHORUS)
Open the door; climb in my bed
Take one step inside my head
You'll find the memories
Of every word we said
I'll walk a perfect line
To show you you're mine
Hold me, just hold me
We'll watch the sun come up

(BRIDGE)
Hold me tight; stay with me tonight
I'll share my secrets, we'll be alright
Be the one to live in both of my worlds
And save me, just save me
We'll watch the sun come up

(OUTRO)
I'm stuck in a dream where lovers are blind
A fire burns leaving ashes behind
A renegade cloud lingers in my room
Reminds me of my lonely nights
Be the one to live in both of my worlds
And hold me, can't we
Watch the sun come up 

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I wanna watch the sun come up
« Last Edit: September 24, 2008, 10:02:58 AM by Casia - lyricist »
Casia Productions:
ALBUM:A NOT Ordinary Christmas-2010
ALBUM:idream -2011
ALBUM:Trevor&Roger's 13 Stygian Tales - 2011

World Festival Universong showcase July 2012, Canary Islands, Spain - Victoria Linskaya 
http://www.reverbnation.com/casia


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Hi:

Tricia I just wanted to thank you personally for a wonderful composition and amazing vocals.  I love it.

Thanks Bobby for playing this for us and arranging it all  :).

Later...Casia
Casia Productions:
ALBUM:A NOT Ordinary Christmas-2010
ALBUM:idream -2011
ALBUM:Trevor&Roger's 13 Stygian Tales - 2011

World Festival Universong showcase July 2012, Canary Islands, Spain - Victoria Linskaya 
http://www.reverbnation.com/casia




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If you don't mind, Tricia, can I have a dry ape of your vocal on this song.
I just want to do a little experimentation, since no one else ever picked up on the actual music.
Thanks,
BW@




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Another nice tune.  Very sweet. 8) Man.. you girls are just a writing and singing machine. I think you 2 are having way too much fun. Keep going !!  :)  Nice song Bobby!  :)

Dave


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Wow...you're busy Casia! Guess Juice is getting really jealous here Tricia...the album must be turning into a reality soon as well! ;D
It's definetely in the same league soundwise as Sundials..burning these while their still free :) (don't worry, I'll still buy it when it comes out!)
Great job everyone!
Marc


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Thanks guys, Yes, too much fun and yes, Juice is jealous. He doesn't know what I'm singing,,,,, he's jealous because I fall asleep while we watch tv at night.... or I can't hear him talking because I have headphones on all the time.  :-[   I better go give him some love.  :-\   ;D    ;)


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 ;D  Yes Tricia, go give Juice some love .... and then get back to what's really important  ;D ;D ;D :o :o

Thanks Dave and Marc.  It's hard not to have fun hanging around here.  But, I'm gonna try REALLY hard to write some different kinds of lyrics without death or loneliness in them...... :-\ Uhmmmm!  What else is there  :-\...help!!

Later...Casia

(Hey - News Bulletin just came in while I posted this:  Does this mean we should remove this and take it back into the studio  ;D )
« Last Edit: September 26, 2008, 09:45:41 PM by Casia - lyricist »
Casia Productions:
ALBUM:A NOT Ordinary Christmas-2010
ALBUM:idream -2011
ALBUM:Trevor&Roger's 13 Stygian Tales - 2011

World Festival Universong showcase July 2012, Canary Islands, Spain - Victoria Linskaya 
http://www.reverbnation.com/casia


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As a result of a PM, that answer would be no.
I guess, just let it go. Although, I have to say, I'm not happy with the music arrangement as is.

Good luck with your collaborations, folks.
I'm back to my own projects, that need attention.
BW@
« Last Edit: September 27, 2008, 10:21:01 AM by Bobby »


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Reading the last comments, the only negative thing I have to say on it is the production values, ditch those cheesy drum machine drums, get a real drummer on it, bring up the beat..get a master mixer here like Nick or Mark to handle production, and you're all set :)
Marc


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I agree, the mix could (and probably should) be much better. But still I love the song. :)

Later,
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