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IF I CAN (Bobby/Billy/Benny)

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Offline Benny

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Bobby started this one as an instrumental improv in "Studio A". Billy came along and laid down some of the most awesome orchestration ever. After hearing the production, I just couldn't resist trying to add a vocal. To come up with lyrics to match the music, I read a bunch of medieval poems and sonnets to get the feel. Have a listen and let us know what you think. And turn it up to get the full effect!

Bobby Watson - piano, bass
Billy Playle - orchestration
Benny Moore - vocal, melody, lyrics, mixing

IF I CAN

At the dusk the clouds roll in; I start to reminisce
My face is cool in the autumn wind; I can feel your summer's kiss
I never knew a longing heart could ever hurt like this
I know somehow I will return to the arms I miss...

(Chorus)
If I can I'll scale the great divide
If I can I'll tame the angry tide
If I can I'll send angels to your side
If I can
If I can

When the artist draws my wounded heart all the colors turn to gray
A melancholy work of art that yearns for yesterday

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
The roses sleep till the morning dew
The oceans run deep like my love for you

Everything that God's bestowed, the taste is bittersweet
Until I have you for my own my life is incomplete

(Chorus)
« Last Edit: December 31, 2010, 03:19:09 AM by Benny »



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OUTSTANDING

Tripple-B with a tripple A grade piece of music!


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Yep. Really amazing piece of work. Absolutely outstanding!!  8)

Nice guys. Great vocals Benny.  :)

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Very beautiful guys...all of it.  And yes, that orchestration is amazing..WOW!

Casia
« Last Edit: March 31, 2010, 01:18:34 PM by Casia - lyricist »
Casia Productions:
ALBUM:A NOT Ordinary Christmas-2010
ALBUM:idream -2011
ALBUM:Trevor&Roger's 13 Stygian Tales - 2011

World Festival Universong showcase July 2012, Canary Islands, Spain - Victoria Linskaya 
http://www.reverbnation.com/casia


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Paul, Doc, Dave and Casia - I appreciate the comments. :)



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Thanks Torren for stopping by and having a listen...

Benny


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Really beautiful song. I love the orchestration. Great lyrics and vocals. Outstanding work on this guys :)

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It sure has Billy's touch... Great production.
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Paulo, thanks for the comment. Yeah, Billy did a great job!


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Excellent....a great collab...this is what being here is all about...top stuff !

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Hey CD and Stoney...I had not read your comments until now. Thanks!


 

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