Just a lie

[Captain fantastic]

This is a collaboration between ,Captain fantastic,severing & mark,The mighty severing still wants to improve upon the song,but I thought I would post it to see what you folks think.

[CosmicDolphin]

I think it sounds good as it is, I don''t know what changes the mighty severing had in mind but it sounds pretty finiished to me.  It's kinda hypnotic...took a little longer than I wanted to get to the vocals but it's very atmospheric and almost soundtrack like.

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[Severing]

These guys kicked ass making this music.  I am taking it to a pro studio next week to redo the vocals, It will be a good test regarding the validity of 2000 dollar condenser mics and tube compressors 

[McLovin]

NICE FEEL!

Post the lyrics when ya get a chance.

[Severing]

How could I be
What was this before
I came to see
You on the floor
How cold
I can be
Severing ties
You can't understand

 C. When a candle burns from both ends you think you're bright
But that's just a lie

How can this become
Forever night
The beginning was strong
Now the ends in sight
You can't
Understand
Severing ties
How cruel I can be

C.

And you wandered baby like a leaf in the breeze
And you wondered maybe till you crashed into me

And I thought you said you were on your way now
And I thought you said that you were on your way now.

[stoman]

Very nice idea! The guitars sound great. The overall mix may need a little more work, but I enjoyed listening to it as is.

Regards,
  Steffen

[AndyG6508]

Nice one guys.

Great performance from everyone.

A different sort of sound - very welcome too.

The mix is quite good, thought the bass needed more presence or level or defintion - or any comb of all three!!

Well done

Andy

[Captain fantastic]

Nice one guys.

Great performance from everyone.

A different sort of sound - very welcome too.

The mix is quite good, thought the bass needed more presence or level or defintion - or any comb of all three!!

Well done

Andy
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My bass is always lacking a bit,I suppose because it is not my choice of instrument(& I only use a cheap one),thanks for the feedback.

[Captain fantastic]

Very nice idea! The guitars sound great. The overall mix may need a little more work, but I enjoyed listening to it as is.

Regards,
  Steffen

Glad you enjoyed it.

[Albino]

Pertty cool.
Reminded me of Alice in Chains (Sap/Jar of flies) and Pink Floyd.

Cool.

[docmidnite]

Great song, super arrangement... overall mix deserves more work 

[Studioplayer]

Nice one guys. Moody. 

Dave

[Stoney]

Very nice feel to this and I can hear the AIC sound in the vocal treatment too

Nice Stuff

Ian

[snowdoguk]

Sounds really good .... nice haunting guitar work.... vocals are brilliant....

[Severing]

Thanks for all the feedback guys, and thanks to MCS for making this possible!