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Offline toadman

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I'd like to thank the following people for their contributions to this song;

toddtown05 - Vocals & great ad libs!
Catfish - Keyboards
Fretlessian (Kompoz) - Bass
Breathtax (Kompoz) - Guitar

Stay - Words and music (c) toadman 2011

The wheel turns around, never slowing down, it just leaves a stain
And the fight never stops, it drives 'till you drop, no games left to play
Some people live by platitudes and their attitude just leaves them grey
'Coz time is a fact, there's no turning back, time is a fact, there's no turning back
And the longer you stay away, the harder it seems to say

Stay with me
Please stay it's so right
Stay with me
Please stay until it's light       

When love burns down, it burns to the ground and turns to a sea of hate
There's no place for passion trying to refashion the heat that once sustained
And every word is broken, lies left unspoken
'Coz time is slippin' away, it's gettin harder for me to say

« Last Edit: May 04, 2012, 12:32:52 AM by toadman »


Offline cyclone

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Great song Mick nice job on the guitars vocals ain`t to shabby either.Nice touch on the keys at the end.
Cyclone
A woman is on trial for beating her husband to death with his guitar collection.
The judge says "First offender?"
The woman says "No, first a Gibson, then a fender."


Offline Benny

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This is a good catchy rock number. The opening riff had me hooked from the start. I like it! 8)


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Good tune Mick. Guitars sound great. It's all a bit heavy on the reverb for my taste but sounds pretty good. Nice job  8)

Dave


Offline toadman

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Thanks guys.
If I hadn't deleted all the original tracks except for a stereo mixdown :'( I may have
been able to add some more gonads to the sound.
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Right out of the 80s!
I hear John Parr  ;D
Great hook and a great voice!

Sorry to hear you "lost" the original tracks, Mick! :(


Offline toadman

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Thanks Doc, I enjoyed working on it and I learned a valuable lesson about deleting stuff.
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