From the title I was expecting something like an Enya Song with guitars
What I got blew my socks off ! Great tune guys...the highest accolade I can pay is that it sounds like a lost Cool Beyond Zero track.
There is an issue with the mix , it's been overcompressed and is 'pumping' ( when the compressor reacts to something loud and pulls the overall volume of the track down )
A little pumping can sound good if done right but this sounds too much - it could also be robbing the bottom end of some weight as I can't really make out the kick and low bass too well.
Hopefully these are easy fixes on the mastering setting - Stonking track otherwise.
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