Musicians Collaboration Studio

Six Days in the Dark - a song written during a 2008 ice storm and blackout

 

Offline Tricia41

  • Super Hero
  • ******
    • Posts: 8578
  • sing
    • Hair by Tricia
stevegardner (Drums)
gbm (Gary) (Keyboard,)
Tricia  (Composer/Writer,Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
Vincent (Composer,Guitar,Mix,)
Smurf  (Bass)


Six Days in the dark
Tricia Dovidio (C)2008
with lyrical tweaks by (PVD)Paul Dempsey
vs1
Came out of nowhere
Like a crash of thunder
the lights went out
leaving me to wonder

vs 2:
At first, like a dream
a mystery to be solved
 
later like a nightmare
As my world dissolved

ch:
 
My six days  in the dark
with nights of bitter cold
the ice surrounds your heart
no love for me to hold

vs3:
my life was a memory
that the world forgot
running out of hope
lost in my thoughts

ch:
My six days  in the dark
 
with nights of bitter cold
 
the ice surrounds your heart

nothing for me to hold


br:
 
Felt my mind leavin' me
             
just like you did
 
darkness was deceivin' me

just like you did

ch:
My six days  in the dark
with nights of bitter cold
the ice surrounds your heart
 
no love for me to hold


Offline Tricia41

  • Super Hero
  • ******
    • Posts: 8578
  • sing
    • Hair by Tricia
I want to thank Vincent for managing this collab. I really love the guitar solo!
so cool. 8) Thanks Steve and Smurf! Great work! 8) and Gary, the piano added so much, I love it.  :) :)

Nice to have this finished.


Offline Paulo

  • Super Hero
  • ******
    • Posts: 4048
I like this tune... I followed it in the Studio and I always liked it. Congratulations you guys and Gal  8)
« Last Edit: June 28, 2009, 09:06:52 AM by Paulo »
Live the best you can 'cause you're gonna be dead for a long time.
Respect
Paulo Gomes



Offline AndyG6508

  • Jedi
  • *******
    • Posts: 12995
    • https://soundcloud.com/bumpy-buttons
Wow gang,

Great song - I liked the unusual production on it too - specially at the beginning!! its kind of lo-fi but it works I think.

Tricia, I am impressed with the way you are coming up with lyrics/songs. You have a nice ear for a catchy hook - and the singings great.

The piano is a nice touch too!!

Well done all!

Andy



Offline Tricia41

  • Super Hero
  • ******
    • Posts: 8578
  • sing
    • Hair by Tricia
Thanks Andy. You're kind.  It's like I always say,.... If you can think or talk, you can write lyrics. It's not rocket science. Am I right? SO many great songs have simple and imperfect lyrics.

Writing songs is really about getting feelings across.  :)


Offline AndyG6508

  • Jedi
  • *******
    • Posts: 12995
    • https://soundcloud.com/bumpy-buttons
Thanks Andy. You're kind.  It's like I always say,.... If you can think or talk, you can write lyrics. It's not rocket science. Am I right? SO many great songs have simple and imperfect lyrics.

Writing songs is really about getting feelings across.  :)

Absolutely, Tricia, and you are doing a fine job..Keep them coming!!

Andy


Offline NickT

  • NickT
  • Administrator
  • Super Hero
  • *****
    • Posts: 5802
  • Here I am!
    • Ain't TV


Offline CosmicDolphin

  • Jedi
  • *******
    • Posts: 10609
  • Do or do not..there is no try
    • Phonicworks : TV Production Music
Great Melody on this one, what's it about Tricia ? Does six days in the dark refer to something ?

CD

We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


Offline Tricia41

  • Super Hero
  • ******
    • Posts: 8578
  • sing
    • Hair by Tricia
Yes, CD, last December, we heard loud cracking noises in the night while trees cracked all around our home, due to the weight of thick ice coating their branches.
 :-\ :-\ :-\
So scary!  Then we lost electricity, water,and heat for 6 days along with half the state of New Hampshire.

Meanwhile, I learned a few chords from a book (reading by candlelight), and I wrote this song! :)

remember I was driving to Wendy's restauraunt for my daily MCS fix???? ;D


Offline CosmicDolphin

  • Jedi
  • *******
    • Posts: 10609
  • Do or do not..there is no try
    • Phonicworks : TV Production Music
Yes, CD, last December, we heard loud cracking noises in the night while trees cracked all around our home, due to the weight of thick ice coating their branches.
 :-\ :-\ :-\
So scary!  Then we lost electricity, water,and heat for 6 days along with half the state of New Hampshire.

Meanwhile, I learned a few chords from a book (reading by candlelight), and I wrote this song! :)

remember I was driving to Wendy's restauraunt for my daily MCS fix???? ;D

What a great story, that's what songwriting is about  :)  ..and a nice song too !

CD

We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


Vincent

  • Guest

This is a good song and I like it a lot however the mix fails/falls short big time... :(



Offline CosmicDolphin

  • Jedi
  • *******
    • Posts: 10609
  • Do or do not..there is no try
    • Phonicworks : TV Production Music
When I went to see Snow Patrol , they explained about a similar situation where they had no electricity due to a lightening strike , I think it was for a couple of days and they wrote in several parts on the latest album some songs called  called The Lightening Strike.

CD
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


 

Powered by EzPortal