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Down On Our Knees (riggorog, detune, groverk, Bassic_Soul, Paulo)

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Offline riggorog

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Here's another finished collaboration. Everybody did a fantastic job of turning my idea into a finished product! They really captured what I had in my head of what this should sound like. Thanks to everyone that contributed! Below are the lyrics and list of collaborators.

Down On Our Knees
(c) 2010 Roger Wilkerson

v1

wandering around wondering why
pretty disturbed but we get by
sometimes life is like an open book
sometimes a train wreck is worth a look

off of the rails is a matter of fact
that's how it goes when you're on the wrong track
falling over is not getting us down
still going through life wearing a crown

c1

don't care what you believe
you don't like it you can get up and leave
leave it alone and leave us be
down on our luck and down on our knees

v2

It's over now, but it's never done
everybody's hurt and nobody won
took too damn long to get this far
too many bottles and too many bars

we got each other and we had enough
given it away and given it up
it's all good, but you don't have a clue
be better off if it happened to you

c2

don't care what you believe
you don't like it you can get up and leave
leave it alone and leave us be
down on our luck and down with disease

bridge

something is better than nothing
had enough pushing and shoving
we got to go and we got to go on
no matter how far no matter how long

c2

don't care what you believe
you don't like it you can get up and leave
leave it alone and leave us be
down on our luck and down on our knees


Collaborators:

detune - melody, lead/bu vocals
groverk - drums
Bassic_Soul - bass
Paulo - keys, mix/master
riggorog - lyrics, composition, guitars, harmonica (programmed)
« Last Edit: October 02, 2010, 08:47:13 PM by riggorog »




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Turned out really nice guys. Love the country flavour to this. Excellent and good job on the mixing Paulo.  :)

Dave



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Riggo,
wow wow wow!!

what a super slice of americana!!

consummate performances and mix. love this tune.

great vocal too!!!

into the i-pod!!

Riggo, your music has got soul man pure rubber soul!

ANdy


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Nice one... Thanks for letting me in  :)
Live the best you can 'cause you're gonna be dead for a long time.
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I made a folder on my desktop where I put all the songs from MCS that will go on my MP3 stick and/or on the next CD for my car. This song is one of those! :)

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Great rootsy melodic soul tune.  Vocals, instrumentation and mix sound great.  I never usually critique on a finished thread but the one thing that stands out to my ears is the kick groove doesn't seem to line up with the bass groove.  Maybe it's just me or it was intentional.  Just something I noticed.
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Thanks Jay :) I know there is one spot we looked at towards the beginning where there seemed to be a misplaced kick, but other than that, I think it's just the way it was played.

Roger


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Guys... I don't think the mix is good... Now that I'm listening louder, sometimes I listen to a click like the tempo click along the song... Am i dreaming or???
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