DON'T FALL (Benny/Doc)

Benny · **on:** November 14, 2010, 07:16:53 PM

A little rock number I wrote, with the help of Doc on guitars. We hope you enjoy it.

DON'T FALL - Benny Moore

Always thought you'd wait around for me
But now there's someone else to sweep you off your feet
Will you let him in to take my place
And will you put me on the outside staring into space

CHORUS
Don't fall...don't fall in love
Don't kiss...don't kiss his lips
I'll die...I'll die if you give in
Don't fall in love with him

Never had the time of day when you came 'round
I locked my heart away six feet underground
Now I'm learning how it feels to wait
I hold my breath as I endure this bitter twist of fate

CHORUS

BRIDGE
Does he make you smile
Does he hold you close
Do you tell him secrets
The ones I should have known

He gives you everything that you deserve
And if you let him go too far you know I might get hurt

CHORUS

Mimmo · **Reply #1 on:** November 15, 2010, 09:54:21 AM

Enjoyed the listen

Mimmo

PVD · **Reply #2 on:** November 15, 2010, 09:36:15 PM

B & D:

Nice job, good listen. Catchy!

Paul

SWANSONG · **Reply #3 on:** November 16, 2010, 01:03:59 PM

IM new here and glad i found this song. well done super job of
both of u . this is true rock . at it s best. a good beat sound
and vocals. is what rock is all about. thumb s up on this NEIL

nitch · **Reply #4 on:** November 17, 2010, 06:00:09 PM

I like it, nicely done guys.

Benny · **Reply #5 on:** November 17, 2010, 11:29:40 PM

Hey Mimmo, Paul, Neil and Nitch...

Thanks for having a listen. Doc and I really appreciate your comments.

Benny

CosmicDolphin · **Reply #6 on:** November 21, 2010, 11:08:05 AM

Good song , I like the acoustic guitar vibe to it too.

Well performed and mixed too , best song in the finished thread I've heard today

CD

riggorog · **Reply #7 on:** November 21, 2010, 05:31:40 PM

Very nice song! I always like your vocals Benny

Well performed and mixed guys!

Roger

r4m · **Reply #8 on:** November 21, 2010, 05:40:20 PM

Nice and tight! Great song! Nice mix, vox, structure, guitars, everything...........Ya got it all here!!!

SWANSONG · **Reply #9 on:** November 22, 2010, 01:12:52 PM

tHIS is super in all w ays. great rock peice. sound very harmonius and great
harmonies this is commerical ready for the radio would b a hit i love the
overall sound...i hope this is a success for you and happy hollidays NEIL

AviR · **Reply #10 on:** November 24, 2010, 03:59:32 AM

Very cool song and very catchy one.
Enjoyed listening.

Benny · **Reply #11 on:** December 02, 2010, 06:41:19 AM

Hey CD, Roger, r4m, Neil and AviR, thanks for listening and commenting.

Stoney · **Reply #12 on:** December 02, 2010, 08:19:38 AM

Hey Guys

This is another fine toe tapping track ...I love those vocal harmonies .. you must have quite a catologue now

Very cool

Ian

McLovin · **Reply #13 on:** December 02, 2010, 03:25:06 PM

GREAT Pop Rock toon! As always.

docmidnite · **Reply #14 on:** December 09, 2010, 05:03:02 AM