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Lonely Love ( CD / Studioplayer / CHHays/ Doc / Dome / Billy ) Pop rocker

 

Offline CosmicDolphin

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It took 69 tracks & 6 months to tame this monster, what started out as a little song idea turned into quite a big track in the end. Just goes to show what can happen here  >:D

The cast of players reads like a who's who of the cream of MCS and special mention to Chuck on drums who's first collab this was, no wonder I'm so happy with the final result !  Thanks guys  8)


Words & Music
Lead Vocals         :  CosmicDolphin

Guitars                :  Studioplayer , DocMidnite, Pleasuredome
Bass                    : Studioplayer

Drums                  : CHHays

Keys                    : Billy

Backing Vox Choir   : Pleasuredome

Mix & Master         : CosmicDolphin
         

Lonely Love

Verse 1

If I go far away  , Would you ask me to stay
Should I go come what may , Like a fool in your sway
'Cause the day's coming round, when I'm leaving this town
I just won't settle down as I hide underground


Bridge

I once thought that we could have made it , but then it faded
And I don't know what to do


Chorus

Should I keep this lonely love , The only one I'm thinking of
Or should I just try to get out of here , Out of here alive                 
I'm in too deep my only love, Trying hard to rise above
Or should I just try to get out of here , Out of here alive 


Verse 2

I think back to the start when I first felt that spark
Then it all fell apart , Memories burn in my heart
Now I'm here and it's cold and my life has been sold
For a small band of Gold , And I'm losing my hold
I once thought we were forever thought I could never
Turn away from you

RPT Chorus

Break

RPT Chorus

Outro
« Last Edit: December 17, 2010, 05:43:30 PM by CosmicDolphin »
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


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I am honored to be the first to comment on this song.   Awesome, awesome, awesome.  It's upbeat and fun and just keeps "giving" til the bitter end... I'm begging for more.  How can one not love this.  I still think Jason Mraz kinda sounds like YOU  ;D :D

Casia

P.S. Now for the "cruel to be kind".  I don't quite understand what you're singing in the last few words/notes of the song.   It sounds kinda painful  ;)
« Last Edit: December 09, 2010, 05:14:35 PM by Casia - lyricist »
Casia Productions:
ALBUM:A NOT Ordinary Christmas-2010
ALBUM:idream -2011
ALBUM:Trevor&Roger's 13 Stygian Tales - 2011

World Festival Universong showcase July 2012, Canary Islands, Spain - Victoria Linskaya 
http://www.reverbnation.com/casia


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P.S. Now for the "cruel to be kind".  I don't quite understand what you're singing in the last few words/notes of the song.   It sounds kinda painful  ;)

Thanks Cas  :-*  :-*  :-*

I'm just riffing on the last line of the Chorus about getting out alive...it's mostly me going ' aliiivvvee..whoaaaah aliiiivvvve..'

Thanks for the listen hope that clears it up  ;)

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Great songs are not written, they are re-witten




Offline CosmicDolphin

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Glad you like guys :) :)

Mark, who's Domehead????? 8) 8)

Ooops..... ;D   That's what I call you when I've been at the cooking sherry  >:D

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Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


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Nice one guys.  8)  Great mix CD. A BIG wall of sound!! It's a really catchy tune and I'm quite pleased to have been a part of this one. I could hear this on radio play.  :)

Great tune!! Came out nice.  8) 8) 8)

Dave


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Thanks HDA  :)

Dave, couldn't have done it without you Bro !

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We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


Offline AndyG6508

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Hi Mark,

I agree with Dave - a big wall of sound - but youve captured every nuance perfectly. The production is crisp, with punch, clarity and a lovely bottom to it.

The performances are top notch - but then how could they not be with such a talented cast.

Catchy melody with the CD touch!!

Cheers
Andy


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Sounds absolutely radio-ready to my old ears. Not my kind of music actually, but I can still hear that it sounds professional in every respect.

Great job, guys!

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WOW!!!!!
Absolutely professional pop song production!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great job in writing and producing this, Mark!!!

xtra kudos for the great bu-vocals, Steve!




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Really good guys... no idea who's doing what but it sounds top notch... excellent
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