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One Last Shot ( CD - R4M - Billy - Groverk - Musobass )

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Offline CosmicDolphin

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on: February 05, 2011, 12:44:56 PM
I wrote this song just over a year ago...I'd been watching X-Factor ( think American Idol if not UK based ) and just thought how tough it must be having to go out there and perform every week and then get voted off  ;D

Took a while to finish it but great job all around, thanks to everyone who helped out  :)

Music & Lyrics
Vox  - Mix & Master : CD

Guitars                  : R4M

Piano, Strings etc    : Billy

Drums                    : Groverk

Bass                      : Musobass


So tired of trying to be flying but I'm still on the ground
I just keep pushing Can't keep rushing around and around

'cause somethings killing me
Got to walk this road into my destiny

We'll give it one more shot
We'll give it all we've got
We won't say no , and we won't let go until we reach the top

The dream that's in our hands
Is never ours to keep
We'll watch it burn while the whole world turns
And we'll never go to sleep
....never go sleep


My phone's not ringing just keep singing
Till I can't talk anymore
What are you bringing to the table
Are you able to soar

Cause there's something you can't see
And it burns inside until I'm breaking free

Rpt Chorus


We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten

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Reply #1 on: February 05, 2011, 03:00:22 PM
Sounds great CD! 8)
Great job everyone! Vox really shine on this!  ;)

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Reply #2 on: February 05, 2011, 03:40:45 PM
CD, you know I'm a big fan of yours - you never disappoint. And this tune has one super catchy chorus! :)

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Reply #3 on: February 05, 2011, 03:51:40 PM
It was a real blessing to be a part of this one! Everyone sounded great! real catchy. My wife walks around the house singing it all the time! LOL.

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Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 06:02:19 PM
Excellent job you guys!  :) :) Really sweet tune.  :)

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Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 10:23:54 PM
Just listened on 'OurStage' from your Facebook link. How did I miss this one? Never even heard it before and I watch pretty much every tune that comes out of this place.  ???  Nice suprise!!  :) Really nice tune CD. Very catchy. Well sung and the music is just fantastic. The guitars, bass & drums are really well done. Nice job bro. It's a keeper!!  8)

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Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 10:46:53 PM
This turned out great Mark - it seems like a perfect theme song for MCS :) :)
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Reply #7 on: February 06, 2011, 04:04:14 AM
Quote from: Studioplayer on February 05, 2011, 10:23:54 PM
How did I miss this one? Never even heard it before and I watch pretty much every tune that comes out of this place. 

Dave, you're losing it Bro - you were the first person to listen when I wrote it !  Check the original thread  ;D   Mind you it was over a year ago....we'll put it down to age !

http://www.musicianscollaboration.com/forum/index.php?topic=5961.0

I guess it evolved over time and didn't ring any bells vs the original bed - thanks everyone for the comments.

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« Last Edit: February 06, 2011, 04:10:38 AM by CosmicDolphin »
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten

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Reply #8 on: February 06, 2011, 04:24:31 AM
Turned out really well cd. An all round perfect pop song. Well done everyone who was involved.
Some nice drums there, groverk  :)

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Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 06:05:15 AM

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Reply #10 on: February 07, 2011, 10:53:45 AM
Quote from: docmidnite on February 07, 2011, 06:05:15 AM
Your best vocal performance as far as I know your works!
:)

Thanks Doc..all I did different was crank up the Melodyne  ;D  ;D  ;D

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We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten

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Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 02:04:23 PM
Nice pop tune... very cool indeed.
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Reply #12 on: February 07, 2011, 02:29:15 PM
Quote from: CosmicDolphin on February 06, 2011, 04:04:14 AM
Dave, you're losing it Bro - you were the first person to listen when I wrote it !  Check the original thread  ;D   Mind you it was over a year ago....we'll put it down to age !
CD

I told you I listen to every tune. So is that due to my age? or the age that it took this song to come together?  ??? :P

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Reply #13 on: February 07, 2011, 11:49:11 PM
Great job all  ;)
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Reply #14 on: February 08, 2011, 07:20:37 PM
Good listen, catchy tune, well done.

Paul

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