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Offline Tricia41

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This collab means a lot to me! I wrote this song a couple of months ago. The chorus came to me while shoveling snow in my driveway.  ;D

Thanks Snowdoguk and Stoman for jumping in early and getting the ball rolling!

Andy rescued me on bass and Albino wowed me with those drums.

Thanks guys!  8)

Vocals: Tricia Dovidio
Lyrics: Tricia Dovidio
Composed by Tricia Dovidio
Guitars: Mike Woodford
Bass: Andy Gupta
Drums: Stephen Smith
Synthesizers: Steffen Offermann
Arranged & mixed by Steffen Offermann


See You Around

Tricia Dovidio (c)2011

 

Verse 1:
Bm                                                          A
In one weak moment, I brought you into my world
Bm                                                     A
I let you be you, not knowing who that was
Bm                                             A
in short order, I saw how evil you were
Bm                                                                G
I laid down the law, and you writhed as a demon does

 

Prechorus:
A                                                            G
I didn't know you saw yourself as such a big deal
A                                                 E
and you didn't know that I held the wheel
G                                        A
you learn as you go............so go

 

Chorus:
D                                      A                        G
you didn't slip through my fingers, I threw you down
D                                     A                 G
you're like a poison in a vessel, I spit you out
A                             G                          Bm
you're a bad seed, I don't need- see you around

 

verse2:

I'm hard to get over, but you'll soon move on to the next

at first meeting, their arms will be open wide

it won't take long, they'll see you're not what you suggest

a line is drawn, and you run to the darker side

 

Prechorus:

they don't know that you think you're on top

and you don't know they call the shots

live and learn... you'll burn

 

Chorus:

you didn't slip through my fingers, I threw you down

you're the poison in a vessel, I spit you out

you're a bad seed, I don't need- see you around

 

bridge:
E
you hold yourself in high esteem
G
the only thing revolving around you
 A
are your insane dreams and
G                       A
multiple personalities


Chorus:

you didn't slip through my fingers, I threw you down

you're like a poison in a vessel, I spit you out

you're a bad seed, I don't need- see you around




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Good song. vocals are handled really well. sounds like a real band.



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I had fun working with you all on this song. Looking forward to the next one. :)

Two comments from Alonetone:

Bethan Mathis:

Good song and sung with great conviction.
Punchy lyrics Tricia.
A very enjoyable listen.



Andrew Russe:

Like it. Good song, good performance all round - still love her vocals!
Excellent recording/mix.


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Love the lyrics, Tricia! Great chorus.

My 9 year old son, Harry says "That's a catchy beat, Dad". Thought I'd pass that on too.  :)



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Hi Tricia,

Good to see this one finished and posted here.

This song has one of your most catchy chorus hooks and is coupled with a great singing performance.

Solid playing from Mike (great little guitar licks), Steve (super drumming) and Steffen (nice little organ touches during the bridge btw).

The mix/production sounds great, we all know how hard we made Steffen work for it ::).

On to the second song then ;).

Thanks for having me along!

Cheers
Andy
« Last Edit: March 13, 2011, 01:17:03 PM by AndyG6508 »


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Hi Tricia this is really a cool song I like it  :) And I wish I could of helped some on this fun project  :) You did a terrific job on the vocals and the lyrics You Rock! And the guys did a terrific job on the music. Yep I'm playing this song again this afternoon. Everyone did a fantastic job! Thank you Tricia your friend Jimmy.
« Last Edit: March 13, 2011, 01:05:12 PM by jfreed18 »



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Hey Tricia,

Wow, this sounds like the cut off some long lost, "Pat Benatar" album...All freshened up, and made new. :)

Great Job everybody, especially on the mix. It sounds so polished, Steffen! Cheers, Johnny     


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Hey Tricia,

Wow, this sounds like the cut off some long lost, "Pat Benatar" album...All freshened up, and made new. :)

Great Job everybody, especially on the mix. It sounds so polished, Steffen! Cheers, Johnny     

 :) :) Thanks Johnny!


 

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